43 - 25/11/15 - Rough Cut Feedback (from target audience

When showing what we've currently edited for our video we received feedback from our class and they told us really beneficial things that will help us further develop our video.

However, we do already know that we need to edit our green screen and collect more/better footage of establishing shots. We were told that we would need to include:

• more shots of the ring (close ups and mid shots where it can be seen) - relates back to the synergy between each product
• more close ups of both artists
• to fade into our footage at the beginning

However, they did give us some good feedback about what the audience enjoyed

• nice slow motion edits
• our artists costumes match, well thought out
• nice fitting locations
• the costume of our artists at Millennium Bridge links with the white studio
• the fillers of our artists in the beginning is really well fitting for our songs theme

We'll be getting more footage at the studio today whilst Monique edits what we already have, just so we can stay on top of things.